Nice poem with great message :)
bhishon bhalo hoyeche aei kobita ta ...tobe tomar lekha amar besh bhalo lage....
bhabnata khub sundor..sudhu last theke 3rd line e, "ak akta" alada kore na likhe akekta lekha jay na?amar jodio sobder bakarongoto dharona khub kom tobe porar somoy mone holo chondota better hoto....
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Nice poem with great message :)
bhishon bhalo hoyeche aei kobita ta ...tobe tomar lekha amar besh bhalo lage....
bhabnata khub sundor..sudhu last theke 3rd line e, "ak akta" alada kore na likhe akekta lekha jay na?amar jodio sobder bakarongoto dharona khub kom tobe porar somoy mone holo chondota better hoto....
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